Its alright
Was decent but the movements of the characters was so rugged, everything seemed like it was in slow motion. Good effort though. Honestly I think this is getting an insane score only because it involves a lot of good artists.
3/5
Its alright
Was decent but the movements of the characters was so rugged, everything seemed like it was in slow motion. Good effort though. Honestly I think this is getting an insane score only because it involves a lot of good artists.
3/5
Animation good, Story.. eh
So she is going to have a Golem kill a guy because he ended up loving another person aside from her? So this is a story about a psycho bitch that can't let go? Jee.
animation is nice, but the story is horrid in the sense that its about physically harming or killing a person because they simply broke up with a girl.
alright
So a boy is in a subway, a crazed woman looks at him and smiles, then jumps into an incoming train..
I don't see what the scary part is, i understand it would be traumatizing to see a person commit suicide in your view but it isn't scary to other people. Not unless you add scary things to it.
anywho, good animation! keep it up! My only reason for docking points is that the beginning is too long with credits.. its like 5 minutes of credits and explanations
Heh
If that fella wanted more respect, he should have stayed in School and went for a more rewarding Career!
Ya don't work hard, ya don't get the tasty juices of life.
Good job though!
Also, what a lot of people miss is investing your income cautiously and intelligently. If someone makes the right moves in stocks, they can do well, even with a lower income... unfortunately that person is not me ;)
Eh, Decent
Decent idea, but was poorly executed, too many pauses, the silence when he said "gogogo" was a bit awkward, no real enthusiasm in the voices. A reaction by the boy would have been more appropriate when the door was kicked in, but instead he was watching the whole time while they kicked in the door, and swarmed in, then he decided to have an appropriate reaction.
I understand you may take offense to this, don't, Lots of people found it funny, if anything look at this as constructive criticism. Imo next time i'd go ahead and make the boy react faster, and the team move in faster, so everything is just 1 big shock to the viewer leaving them with their mouth open, and possibly laughing.
Good work, but only in my opinion, could use some more work.
Keep it up.
No prob man! I really appreciate constructive criticism
Hmm
Funny, good, etc, but if the Thing he created is capable of turning everything on earth "including glass and all other materials" into ..colorful objects, then how did that glass tube even hold it in the first place? Would it convert the glass tube? nit pickin lol
Amazing
So, who did the voice acting? Because the Voice was just amazing. Very good quality, that is what made this flash. The way the voice pronounced the words, how it was just smooth as silk, etc.
Awesome work. Love it.
Remember
you will NEVER satisfy everyone. Some people want to see toons piss their pants when they see a T-rex, I wouldn't. I think you got this spot on. The Animation was progressively getting funnier and the T-Rex topped it off, why? because of the reaction.
The pause, then how we went on to show his dismay, and the fact that it cut out so quickly before he finished his sentence. Prime work there, leaves people laughing without making it awkward (if it was there for too long).
Overall, awesome work, gives me a good laugh each time I view it. The Score is well deserving.
thanks a lot!
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